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Embrace me
I'm ready from the storm
No more looking back
i have no desire for the norm
This world has brought me sorrow
and unfathomable pain
now i'm found a chance to leave
a way not to go insane
save me tempest
let your waves take me
thunder claps and static light
thats the last this i wish to see
no fear clouds my eyes
only the ones in the sky
so i see the chaos
and i feel the high
leaping from a platform
become one with the hale
i'll die with the rain
with no regrets as i turn pale
I'm ready from the storm
No more looking back
i have no desire for the norm
This world has brought me sorrow
and unfathomable pain
now i'm found a chance to leave
a way not to go insane
save me tempest
let your waves take me
thunder claps and static light
thats the last this i wish to see
no fear clouds my eyes
only the ones in the sky
so i see the chaos
and i feel the high
leaping from a platform
become one with the hale
i'll die with the rain
with no regrets as i turn pale
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ok, this idea came from one of my very favoirte quotes by one of my favorite Authors
"When tempest tossed, embrace Chaos." -Dean Koontz
i love that quote, so i drew some insparation from it.
it turned out sounding like a suicide poem (BUT ITS NOT!)
enjoy!
"When tempest tossed, embrace Chaos." -Dean Koontz
i love that quote, so i drew some insparation from it.
it turned out sounding like a suicide poem (BUT ITS NOT!)
enjoy!
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I love it. I love your little noun phrases about fear clouds and static light, such beautiful images. Really flows well, it's so great to read. I think you are a real talent. I love you other poems too, but this one is special (and there is nothing wrong with suicide poetry, you put it in a poem so you don't act on it )